A Brewery Experienced
Cam
Stewart
A man in classic German attire pumps his
accordion. His face rapidly changes from somber to grimacing while the camera
zooms in on his eyes and a red light burns from beneath. Then in a Hendrix-like
fury he sets his accordion on fire and dances feverishly around his blazing
instrument. While this may all sound bizarre (and it definitely is), perhaps
what is most surprising is that this video is not an advertisement for spicy
German sausage but for Bell’s Brewery. Or maybe it’s only strange until you
really think about it for a moment.
Bell’s Brewery, Inc. makes beer like Jimi Hendrix
played the guitar: both using a shared knowledge of classical rules with which to experiment to produce something that is wild and unique. But while
Hendrix revolutionized guitar music, Bell’s founder Larry Bell focuses instead
on ales and stouts, porters and lagers.
And his focus has met its bounty.
Recently christened the “4th Best Beer
Town in America” by Livability.com, Kalamazoo, Michigan owes this acclaim largely
to Bell’s success. The award comes at a time when Bell’s Brewery is focusing on
expansion and distribution, its product being sold in fourteen states and
counting.
In 2003 Bell’s opened a massive brewing facility
in Comstock, a neighboring town to Kalamazoo. Its exterior is like some
military base where every person is stiff and upright, all walking in front of
grey, dwarfing brewing barrels that look like upturned beer mugs. Comstock’s
quaint atmosphere and its spanning open land make it an obvious choice for
Bell’s main brewing facility. Here, nearly 180,000 barrels are brewed annually,
allowing the brewery to be 8th in volume out of all domestic craft
brews in 2010. While downtown Kalamazoo could not facilitate such immense beer
production, it is still home to the brewery’s main pub and eatery, the
Eccentric Café.
Walk through the heavy doors of Bell’s Eccentric
Café and see what appears to be a haphazard combination of company product,
local art and 1930’s African Safari. A tribal mask hangs to the right of the
chalk board on which the bar’s draft beers are written. In three columns the
available beers and occasional sangria are listed. High on the back walls are
large posters advertising the brewery’s beers. They hang like grand statements
of some higher knowledge, like what you are looking at is the culmination of
infinite attempts at greatness. To judge whether or not the brewery has reached
that level, one must only shift one’s gaze downward, to the swarms of people
that, in gleeful cycles, parade to and from the bar with plastic cups of amber
liquid.
It is March 26 and is the official release day of
Bell’s most famous beer, Oberon. A wheat ale robust in fruity aromas and spicy
malt, Oberon is the ultimate sign of spring in Kalamazoo. The bottle’s label
looks like a Michigan sun spread out against a pale blue sky. Looking at the
bottle is like looking into a summer afternoon void of any predicament or bad
news. Drinking the beer is like one’s first experience listening to ‘Purple
Haze’: everything you tasted before it becomes stale in a wash of intense
flavor. Just like many would argue “Are You Experienced” to be Hendrix’s best
work, many craft brew fanatics would claim Oberon to be Bell’s master work. Looking
around the bar on that Monday night in March, a scene more reminiscent of a rowdy
Saturday night, one would be hard-pressed to disagree.
I approach the bar with my plastic cup, a material
used only on Oberon day due to the high-volume of customers, and order an
Oberon. The bartender, a tall man with focused eyes, asks me if I would like an
orange slice in my beer. All around me I notice patrons with slices of orange
in their ales, so I say yes, I’d like mine with an orange slice. I drink the
beer and it is cold. Behind me four men are toasting one another, singing the
praises of warmer weather all while holding cups of foaming Oberon.
The beer comes from the same Comstock plant
roughly 20 miles away. The same plant that is faced with the riveting yet
daunting task of expansion, of pushing one’s product further into the market. But
doing so can often be met with conflict. In 2006, Larry Bell pulled his product
from the Illinois market due to a dispute over distribution rights within the
state. Bell felt that his product was not going to be thoroughly represented
under the strict laws and therefore decided to withdraw completely from the
state, a bold statement that embodies the passion Bell has for his product.
Through clever labeling tactics Bell has begun to
reintroduce his beer into the Chicago-area market. Under the guise of
“Kalamazoo Beer,” Bell has put two new beers back into the state of Illinois, a
move that proves his desire to become a national institution.
I return back from Oberon night at Bell’s and
think again about the online commercial and its intended message. Why am I so
convinced of the image of Larry Bell bent over his voodoo potion like Hendrix
knelt before a guitar engulfed in flames?
Maybe there truly is an existent parallel between
Jimi Hendrix and Bell’s beer. Something in the wailing blast of wheat and orange
notes would make Jimi smile. After sipping his beer, that is.
Cam,
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of a brewery profile. Bell's is definitely a Kalamazoo landmark, so it's a great place to choose. I found myself a little bit confused about what your profile topic truly is, though. Is it Bell's as a corporation? Is it one brewery? Is it the beer itself? I'd like to see a more solidified focus here.
I think you did an interesting thing with the way in which you inserted yourself into the narrative. Here too, though, it seemed like a little too much. The ad works if you're profiling the company. The part where you sip Oberon for the first time doesn't seen too important if you want to write about Bell's as a company, though. If your focus is directly on the beer, on the other hand, it might be important.
I'd also like to see a few more sources and perhaps some quotes. Did you talk to Larry Bell? How do you know about his Illinois move? Sources also might add a stronger connection to a more specific topic. I love the starting idea and I'm excited to see where the story goes!
Cam,
ReplyDeleteA very well written and polished piece. Your descriptions of both the brewery and the café “put me there” – and using metaphoric language (for example, how the signs are “like grand statements of higher knowledge…” furthered the idea of Larry as this impassioned potions-master) nailed it. I love how the military complex description of the brewery painted an instant image, and recounting your experience at the bar gave me the “feeling” of what it was like to experience Oberon Day at Bell’s itself. Furthermore, it was clever to correlate Jimi Hendrix with Larry on many levels – person to person, songs to beers, methodology of the craft (classic rules made “wild and unique”) – nice. Lastly, you made me "taste" the beer. Hard to do for someon who is as picky as I am!
Good job Cam.
Cam,
ReplyDeleteI want to agree with Maggie in that I love the idea of a brewery profile but I too found myself a bit confused about what your profile topic truly was – was it a brewery at all? Or is this piece trying to get at Larry Bell, the man behind the beer? It seems near the end of your piece that it is, in fact, Mr. Bell. I enjoyed the section about his quarrel with the great State of Illinois but I want a little more explanation of the events and his motivations. How did his “eccentric(?)” personality inform his actions? Or his business? Also, wasn’t Larry Bell a Kalamazoo College dropout? Maybe there have already been profiles written about the man, but I sense there’s a great profile piece here considering his life story, and with your writing skills I bet you could make it a reality. If the brewery itself is your target, I would just include more sensory description of the place. This is a great start and you’re clearly a very capable writer so I’m excited to see where you decide to go with this one.
Paul
Cam,
ReplyDeleteThis was an awesome piece to read! I really liked the way in which you took us from the commercial and it’s parallels to Jimi Hendrix, and then to the scene at Oberon night, and then back again to the commercial. It was a nice metaphor.
You are very much a part of your piece, which you do wonderfully, but I wonder if you need some commentary. You talk a lot about the owner, and I am interested to know if these facts came from an interview, or they can be found online, etc. Could you include some dialogue with him or simply clear up this confusion?
I think you also do a fantastic job in describing the beer. I’m sure I can speak for many in the class in that we’ve tried Oberon and understand the tastes you describe. Even to one who has never had the privilege of tasting Oberon could form a clear sense of what they’re missing out on!
Overall, really great work Cam!
Steph
Hi Cam,
ReplyDeleteI think it's cool that you applied what we talked about when describing music to describing taste (and even confounding taste and sound in your Hendrix analogy). You never used the tropes of beer-marketing vocabulary, which worked well. On drafting your final version of this piece, you might want to suss out a frequent passive-voice construction in your descriptive paragraphs. I’d also like to see more interactions between you and the Bell’s patrons, and to have a little bit more of you come through in your voice. I think your presence in the piece is fine, but I don’t get a very clear sense of you other than a passive participant. Is there anything annoying/problematic about Oberon Day, the beer, its fans and the people who throw it, or is everything hunky-dory? I’m excited to read your final draft.
Elaine
Cam,
ReplyDeleteReally interesting piece and a fun read. I like the Jimi Hendrix piece. It was really imaginative and descriptive. Your piece was a good mix of information and narrative. Also I also find it very hard to describe the taste of beer, but you did an awesome job! It was obvious that you were describing Oberon and I think even someone who has never had it before would be able to take something out of it.
I think it worked that you were part of the narrative, but at times I thought you were a little too present. Also I would like to see more interviews with other people. I know it's difficult, but you should keep trying to meet with Larry Bell.
-Jordan